A young boy with brown eyes and brown hair too, wants to play tennis in his house, precisly in his sitting room. The sitting room is very simple, like him. Its walls are white with some shelves, behind him there is a very ugly and mess kitchen. In front of him there is a ball, a tennis ball. Then this boy takes the tennis racket and throws it against the wall, but since this guy is very stupid he throws it so hard that so the tennis ball bounces back on his face and brokes his nose.
BERTA: The event you described is an excellent candidate for the darwin award!! Now you need to make this event "real" by putting it in the "past narrative tenses" like in the examples.
also try to combine your adjectives instead of making separate sentences. And ONLY use adjectives which contribute to your story. (you know what i mean)
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