Toni's DARWIN AWARD story

during a tennis practice sessons on a push tennis court in Gstad a hight school student named Elbru, dicided to check out a tennis ball machine, to now how it worked. it wasn`t necessary to say the machine was working. He put his nose into the machine to inspect it, sudently a ball hit him on the nose breacking it and knocking him out.

better to say "to SEE how it worked.

also, " It wasn't necessary to say" IT GOES WITHOUT SAYING, THAT....

IN GENERAL...VERY GOOD WORK...PLEASE INCORPORATE THESE CORRECTIONS AND EDIT YOUR POST